我的教師英文寫(xiě)作評(píng)析
my teacher
I have an English teacher 。She is tall。She like playing with us。 She like dressing yellow clothes。 In her class ， I am very ative 。Because she is kind in class 。Our classmates like her so much。 But now ，she said ： she was left with us ， I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I Love her very much。 I hope she can continue doing our teacher。
1�！癝he like playing with us。 She like dressing yellow clothes。 ”因主語(yǔ)是第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)采用動(dòng)詞的三單形式，故“l(fā)ike”應(yīng)改為“l(fā)ikes”；“dress”意為“給某人穿衣”，故句中“dressing”應(yīng)改為“wearing”。如采用并列賓語(yǔ)，這兩句可以合并為一句，更簡(jiǎn)練：She likes wearing yellow clothes and playing with us。
2�！癐 have an English teacher 。She is tall�！比绾喜椤癕y English teacher is tall�！蹦阏J(rèn)為哪種形式更好呢？
3�！癇ecause she is kind in class 。Our classmates like her so much。 ”此句為含有原因狀語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句，從句放在句首用逗號(hào)，主句句首字母應(yīng)小寫(xiě)�！癘ur classmates ”改為“my classmates and I”更確切。
4�！癇ut now ，she said ： she was left with us ， I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I Love her very much。 ”其中“But now ”與后句時(shí)態(tài)在時(shí)間上不符，故將“now”去掉�！皊he said ： she was left with us ， ”為賓語(yǔ)從句，出現(xiàn)三處錯(cuò)誤：形式錯(cuò)誤，去掉冒號(hào);從句時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)改為過(guò)去將來(lái)時(shí);“was left with us ”表達(dá)欠當(dāng)。故此句改為“she said （that） she would leave us ， ”
“I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I Love her very much。 ”應(yīng)改為“I am sorry to hear that because I love her very much。 ”
5。最后一句“I hope she can continue doing our teacher。 ”中的“doing”應(yīng)改為“being”。
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